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My parents work in a school in my city, and I learn a lot of with from their stories.
About my experience: I minded used to look after/babysit my cousins sometimes when I was younger. Later I worked as a private teacher for 2 years, with children between 4-8 years, and sometimes I minded them until their parents arrived at home. I helped to the bigger/older boy with all his school subjects, and with the little girl we practised English. In 2009 I again minded/looked after the same children in their house, I helped with the homework, and we played together. In 2009 I also started as School Canteen Assistant, helping the children to have the meals, and look after supervising them in the playground too. And In March this year(???) I started to work as an au pair in Dublin with a lovely family. Since then I am have been minding two children between 2 and 4 years old. I love playing with them, going to the playground, playing in the garden and with in the sandpit, and go three days a week I accompany with the girl to playgroup, and every day I collect the boy all days from the Montessori. Each day I prepare all days their meals.
Issues with verb tense, past tense. I am not sure whether it is now, or several years ago, and whether it is still ongoing
Part 2
My parents work in a school in my city and I learn a lot of from their stories.
About my experience: I minded my cousins sometimes when I was younger. I worked as a private teacher for 2 years with children between 4-8 years and sometimes I minded them until their parents arrived at home. I helped to the big boy with all subjects and with the little girl, we practiced English. In 2009 I minded the same children in their house. I helped with the homework and we played together. In 2009 I started as School Canteen Assistant, helping the children to have the meal and look after them in the playground too. In March I started to work as an au pair in Dublin with a lovely family. I am minding two children between 2-4 years old. I love playing with them, going to the playground, playing in the garden and with the sand. I go three days a week with the girl to playgroup, and I collect the boy every day from the Montessori. I prepare all days their meals every day.
[Good job. It sounds like you enjoy your work. It is either "I love to play" or "I love playing"]
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