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the thing you lost in the sea, do not get it back! I went to Hainan island last month with my roommate ,you know Sanya ,it's a beautiful city ,we're feeling so fun that days,even though there had some problem around .At the first day we went to Tianya Haijiao ,the scenery is nice ,we 're excited and take picture by the beach,when we worked to Haijiao take photo ,one of my shoes fall in to the sea,then i wanted to get it back ,so many rocks around ,i thought although the wave looked so powerful,but the rocks can help ,so my shoes is still closed to me . acturally i cant saw the shoes ,and i seek it for a while .when i want to gave up ,the powerful wave come ,and strike me down,i was so scared and feel die is closed to me .furtunately i get the rock and stand up ,but unfuntunately i was sobby and the phone was broken. i repaired it cost me 500yuan .

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the thing If You Lose Something in By the Sea, Do Not Try Get It Back!

I went to Hainan island last month with my roommate ,you know as know as Sanya. It's a beautiful city ,we're feeling so fun that days We were having fun, even though there had some problem around something bad happened. At the first day we went to Tianya Haijiao ,the scenery is nice  and the landscape was so beautiful that we 're were excited and take took picture by the beach,when we worked walked to Haijiao take photo ,one of my shoes fall fell in to the sea,whereby so many rocks stuck up then i wanted to get it back ,so many rocks around ,i thought although the wave looked so powerful,but the rocks can might help ,so and my shoes is was still closed close to me . acturally i cant couldn't saw see the shoes ,and i seek searched it for a while .when i want was nearly to gave give up ,the there came up powerful wave come ,and strike struck me down,i was so scared and feel die felt dying is closed to me .furtunately i get  got the rock and stand stood up ,but unfuntunately i was sobby sobbing and the phone was broken. i sent it to the repairman repaired and it cost me 500yuan
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