Crossing borders

Hi everyone, I need some help because I have to make a redaction for school and I don't have inspiration. Can you help me? This text is about : "crossing borders". Thanks a lot ! :)


I'm going to tell you why travelsing areis rewarding and fascinating and why it's really worth going into anothers countries.

-->What does travelling bring you ?

*Travelling brings you wisdom and another point of view:
*Travelling breaks the routine

If you're tired of working and living in a gray and lazy world, travelling represents a very good opportunity to take your mind offescape the boredom.

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When you gotravel in a foreingforeign country, you discover a new culture, and new ways of life. It's also the occasion to discover a new language and improve yourself. Alone, itTraveling alone makes you more independantent and more responsible than before, it also brings you self-confidence. You can have time for yourself, too. : tToday, time can be considered as a luxury in our society considers time a luxury because we have never enough time to do what we want.

There is more than one way this could be written and still maintain the general theme. I tried to limit the corrections in order to keep as much of your original text intact. Also, in written English, it is best to avoid contractions such as: you're, you've, it's, etc. Contractions are normal when casually speaking or writing dialog for a story, but it is better to use both words in more formal writing.

J'espère que cela aide.