Working by in French in Chad, Llearning the English by myself(I might say "on my own")

I think I have to should tell you at the first, my friends, that this is the first time for me to write I have written here. I've thought if I should about preparing prepare a draft for this first article, for because I'm really serious for about learning the English by on italki. Though in the end At the final, these words you could see here are my first draft are not passed through the paper of draft. Because I hope the fresh words (maybe "fresh from my brain" or "just out of my brain", but not both)just out of my brain are what you see could be seen, instead of the modified ones. The real side nature of my English should be seen. And then, I can know my real abilities from capacity by your comments, my friends! :)

OK, now I would like to introduce myself to for you, my friends. I'm ZhenZHOU, a Chinese person who currently works now in Chad (a country in Africa). Actually, I work for every day in Chinese and French every day; but one day, I talked with said to myself, "Hey guy! Why you're not why aren't you good at speaking English? And do you think you should be good at it or not?" I responded,"I need it, English fluency a talent English capacity, why not?! Who can refuse this international language?!"

And then, this questioner introduced me to italki introduce italki for me :P

That's why I'm here !

Hey my friends, don't hesitate to comment on my words, I'll thank for your help! And in return, I'll try my best to teach you the chinese and the french! :P

Thank a lot !

Great job! I tried to make some different suggestions, because you already have a great correction from Anna M. Your notebook entries from Chad are really interesting, keep writing. Your english is quite good, especially since you are not editing it. (We call this "stream of consciousness").

Working in by French in Chad, Learning the English by Myself

I think I have to tell you up front, my friends, that this is the first time I have written here. I thought about whether I should prepare a draft for this first article, because I'm really serious about learning the English by using italki. Ultimately, these words you're reading haven't been through a draft. Because I want people to read the raw fresh words just out of my brain could be seen, instead of the modified ones. The reality of my English should be seen. And then, I can know my real capacity by your comments, my friends! :)

OK, now I would like to introduce myself to you, my friends. I'm ZhenZHOU, a Chinese person who works now in Chad (a country in Africa). Actually, I use Chinese and French at work every day.  One day, I asked myself, "Hey guy! Why aren't you you're not good at speaking English? And do you think you should be good at it or not?" I responded,"I need to develop my English skills. it, a talent English capacity, Why not?! Who can refuse this international language?!"

And then, this questioner(who??) introduced italki for me :P

That's why I'm here !

Hey my friends, don't hesitate to comment on my words, I appreciate thank for your help! And in return, I'll try my best to teach you the chinese and the french! :P

Thank a lot !