Interesting facts about my country
One of the most interesting natural features in Spain are the coasts, there are many types of coasts and all them beautiful.
The best time of the year to visit my country can be summer, well, it depends on the person, but if you want to take a bath in Mediterranean Sea it is a good time! I recomend you visit Balearic islands! Menorca is a hippie island, with varied beaches and good food! Mallorca also has beautiful beaches, but is more tourist. Ibiza is my favourite island, I've been there many times! Is the combination of relax and party, depends on you, if you want to be calm you can stay in the northern, but if you wanna party you must be in the southern!
But if you want to visit some historic cities of Spain, like Córdoba or Madrid, I recomend you visit them in spring or autum, because in summer the heat is insupportable!
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Great job! I am just beginning to learn Spanish and would love to be as good as this! Some ideas/changes below. Best of luck!
Interesting facts about my country
One of the most interesting natural features in Spain are the coasts, there are many types of coasts and all of them are beautiful.
The best time of the year to visit my country can be summer (but) it depends on the person. but If you want to take a bath in the Mediterranean Sea it is a good time! I recommend you visit the Balearic islands! Menorca is a hippie island, with varied (many) beaches and good food! Mallorca also has beautiful beaches, but is more touristy (this is almost a slang word. You could also say "but there are too many tourists"). Ibiza is my favourite island, I've been there many times! It is the combination of relaxing and partying (which make it so great). But at the end of the day (this is a common phrase meaning ultimately) it depends on you, if you want to be calm you can stay in the northern, but if you want to party you should go to the southern!
But if you want to visit some historic cities of Spain, like Córdoba or Madrid, I recommend you visit them in spring or autumn, because in summer the heat is (too much, unbearable, insufferable).
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Great job!
Interesting facts about my country
One of the most interesting natural features in Spain are the coasts, there are many types of coasts and all of them are beautiful.
The best time of the year to visit my country can be summer, well, it depends on the person, but if you want to take a bath in the Mediterranean Sea it is a good time! I recommend you visit the Balearic islands! Menorca is a hippie island, with varied (maybe "diverse" would be better) beaches and good food! Mallorca also has beautiful beaches, but it is more touristy. Ibiza is my favourite island, I've been there many times! It Is the perfect combination of relaxation and party (fun), it depends on you, if you want to be calm you can stay in the northern part, but if you wanna want to party you must be in the southern part of Spain!
But if you want to visit some historic cities of Spain, like Córdoba or Madrid, I recomend you visit them in spring or autumn, because in the summer the heat is unbearable insupportable!
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This is very good. I would change one thing, as the others have made some corrections except the one I see as needing correction. 'if you want to take a bath in Mediterranean Sea it is a good time' I would change to 'if you want to bathe in the Mediterranean Sea it is a good time, As 'taking a bath' is when you go into the bath tub to clean yourself.
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