3-2 the value of art program
Unquestionably, the building of the facilities in medicine and sports would be beneficial to the health of the masses. Furthermore, as we all know, only with a healthy body, can we enjoy our daily life, work efficiently, and, of course, be in the mood to purse the spiritual enjoyment. What’s more, it’s the most simple and rapidly way to bear fruit of improved population quality. On the flip side, it could occupy more space and have potential security liability, which tends to cost much more money than predicted.
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3-2 the value of art program(me)
Unquestionably, the building of the facilities in medicine and sports would be beneficial to the health of the masses. Furthermore, as we all know, only with a healthy body, can we fully enjoy our daily life, work efficiently, and, of course, be in the mood to pursue the spiritual enjoyment. What’s more, it’s the most simple and effective/rapidly way to bear fruit/reap the benefits(?) of the improved population quality of life(?). On the flip side, it could occupy more space and have potential security liabilities/risks/exposure, which tends to cost much more money than make costs exceed predictions.
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