My article

Hi, I study industrial engineering and I am writing an article about my thesis. Please I need to know if this is understandable.

The Peruvian textiles are recognized internationally for the quality of its there natural fibers, has and have used this advantage to penetrate demanding markets, although currently customers demand products with high quality. and At the same time, this these products should be produced in compliance with international standards of sustainable development , which is why this article is to indicate the importance of the design of an integrated management system. The system aimed aims to at the integrate of quality management systems , improve security of the supply chain, and increase social responsibility , development productivity , increased efficiency and competitiveness. Furthermore, it attempts to establish business models of the companies studied, improving the ability to anticipate trends and conducting product development processes which are creative and innovative.

Investigated about The textile sector was investigated, analyzing and the industry's in the state political, social and economic states were analyzed. The study was conducted at 6 six major exporters in Lima. evaluating Their trend graphs and export volume production processes were evaluated, from the spinning to the packaging. Subsequently, using management tools like the Deming cycle and based on certifications such as ISO 9001:2008, ISO 26000 and WRAP (a social responsibility system for production of clothing) , we designed the implementation model.

We made this model and analyzed the information, then integrated management systems of quality, safety and supply chain social responsibility. The results are the development of procedures cadres for each management system, improving processes and facilitating audits, but the greatest benefit is the traceability of processes, because this tool allows us to know the history, location and trajectory of a product or batch of products along the supply chain at any given time.

It is essential that companies change their organizational culture to meet the requirements in a certification and requirements to the client certification and client requirements. Additionally, management systems should be performed when the systems operate suitably and are administered together by a leader. Otherwise, each system must work separately to strengthen, interact properly with other systems and effectively contribute to the strategic objectives.

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Pretty good job. I'm not familiar with this specialized field at all so it was tough to be sure if I understood the gist of it. You used a lot of vocabulary which has proprietary definitions for different fields. You only need one space after each comma, and some examples of this that I changed are at the locations of the red commas. Good job!

My article

Hi, I study industrial engineering and I am writing an article about my thesis. Please I need to know if this is understandable.

The Peruvian textiles are recognized internationally for the quality of their natural fibers. (Who? The Peruvian textile industry?) has used this advantage to penetrate demanding markets. However, customers currently demand high-quality products that are also produced in compliance with international standards sustainable development. This is why this article will explain the importance of the design of an integrated management system , aimed at the integration of quality management systems , the security of the supply chain and social responsibility , development productivity , increased efficiency and competitiveness**. Furthermore, it attempts to establish business models of the companies studied, improving the ability to anticipate trends and conducting creative and innovative product development processes.

Investigating the textile sector, analyzing the industry's political, social and economic situation. The study was conducted at 6 major exporters in Lima by evaluating their trend graphs and export volume production processes, from spinning to the packaging. Subsequently, using management tools like the Deming cycle and based on certifications such as ISO 9001:2008, ISO 26000 and WRAP ( social responsibility system for production of clothing) , we designed the implementation model.

Having made this model and analyzed the information (integrated management systems of quality, safety and supply chain social responsibility), we can see the results: the development of procedures cadres for each management system, improving processes and facilitating audits. The greatest benefit was the traceability of processes, because this tool allows one to know the history, location and trajectory of a product or batch of products along the supply chain at any given time.

It is essential that companies change their organizational culture to meet the certification requirements and those to the client. Additionally, management systems should be performed when they are suitably administered together by a leader. Otherwise each system must work separately to strengthen, interact properly with other systems and effectively contribute to the strategic objectives.

Gracias :)

Interesting and complex writing. You clearly have done a lot of research. Good luck in your studies!