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hello today I got my finger cut, not badly, but i was scared by the blood~ Luckily , my classmates helped to clean it, and Erin helped me to wash my hair that made me think of the time when i was little my mom washed my hair , thanks her for what she did to me .

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Hello today

I cut my finger cut, not badly, but I was scared by the blood~ Luckily, my classmates helped to clean it, and Erin helped me to wash my hair, which made me think of the time when I was little and my mom washed my hair.  I thank her for what she did to me.

 

[Good work.  If you say you got your finger cut, it implies that you asked someone to cut your finger for you.  Remember to put a space after periods and commas, not before.]

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why you cut your finger then wash your hair?

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