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i don't want give up my english and german i graduated from college 4 monthes ago,i don't want give up my english and german. several days ago,i met three Pakistanis on my work.they can't speak chinese,and their english is not good too.i should give service to them in english though my english is not so good.well,in the end,i finished it.according that,i know i can't give up my english though i have been graduated from college.it is important,isn't? i start study german when i am in college.because i like germany culture.i also interested in german movies and songs.but after i studying german i found that it is so hard to study.so my german is so poorrrrr.but i don't want give it up too.it is one of my interests,though i love its culture more than its language.i am going to pick it up recently.

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I don't want give up using my English and German

I graduated from college 4 monthes ago, and I don't want give up using my English and German.
Several days ago,i I met three Pakistanis on my at work. They can't speak Chinese, and their English is not very good too either. I should give provide service to them in using English, but though my English is not so very good either. Well, in the end, I was able to help them. i finished it. Accordingly that, I know that I can't give up my English even though I have been already graduated from college. It is important to keep practicing, isn't it?
I started studying German when while I was am in college, because I liked the Germany culture a great deal. I am also interested in German movies and songs. However, but after I began studying German, I found realized that it is was a very so hard language to study. Because it was so difficult, my German is so very poorrrrr. But I don't want give it up speaking German either, since too.it too, is one of my interests, although I love its the culture more than its then language. I am going to begin becoming more fluent in it soon. pick it up recently.


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                 i don't want give up my english and german

    i graduated from college 4 monthes ago,i don't want give up my english and german.
several days ago,i met three Pakistanis on my work.they can't speak chinese,and their english is not good too.i should give service to them in english though my english is not so good.well,in the end,i finished it.according that,i know i can't give up my english though i have been graduated from college.it is important,isn't?
    i start study german when i am in college.because i like germany culture.i also interested in german movies and songs.but after i studying german i found that it is so hard to study.so my german is so poorrrrr.but i don't want give it up too.it is one of my interests,though i love its culture more than its language.i am going to pick it up recently.

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