I was not a good baby when I was premature delivered in 7 months. I was always crying which made my families very exhausted. I was always sick and go to hospital every day. All the doctors said that I could not be alive and let my mother give up treatment...... All the above stories were told by my parents along with my growing. Obviously, my parents didn't believe what the doctors said and they continue looking for better doctors. Due to their firmly believe, I survival from the unhealthy situation during my early childhood. My family had a very poverty life when I was a child.My father was a teacher while the salary was so low at that time. In order to have a better life, my mother lived my hometown and came to Shanghai alone. She was so brave and strong. We visited my mother twice during the Spring Festival and Summer holiday. Every time she was extremely happy when we were around her. She never refused any requests from my side. She wanted me and my brother to be happy.Even though my parents have been separated more than 15 years, they are relationship is still very well. We treasure the time we stay together and love each other very much. My parents have contributed a lot for the warm family. As time goes by, gray hairs come out their head and wrinkles occur on their face. I hope they can have a healthy and interesting life. :)

Great love from parents

I was not a good healthy baby when I was prematurely deliveried in at 7 months. I was always crying, which made my familiesy very exhausted. I was always sick and had to go to hospital every day.  All the doctors said that I could not be alive  would not live and let recommended my mother give up treatment...... All the above stories were told by my parents along with my while I was growing up. Obviously, my parents didn't believe what the doctors said and they continued kooking looking for better doctors. Due to their firmly belief conviction, I survived from the unhealthy situation during circumstances of my early childhood.

My familiy had a very poverty life lived in poverty when I was a child young. My father was a teacher while but the salary was too low at that time. In order to have a better life, my mother lived left my hometown and came went to Shanghai alone by herself. She was so brave and strong. We visited my mother twice a year during the Spring Festival and Summer holiday. Every time we visited she was extremly happy when we were around her. She never refused any requests from my side me. She wanted me and my brother to be happy. Even though my parents have been separated more than 15 years, they are their relationship is still very well good. We treasure the time we are together and love each other very much. My parents have contributed a lot to the warmth of our family.

As time goes by, grey hairs come out their head and wrinkles occur on their face. I hope they can have a healthy and interesting life. :)

Great love from parents

I was not a good baby when I was premature deliveried in 7 months. I was always crying which made my families very exhausted. I was always sick and go went to hospital every day.All the doctors said that I could not be alive and let my mother give up treatment...... All the above stories were told by my parents along with my growing. Obviously, my parents didn't believe what the doctors said and they continued looking for better doctors. Due to their firmly belief, I survival survived from the unhealthy situation during my early childhood.
My familiy had a very poverty life when I was a child. My father was a teacher while the salary was so low at that time. In order to have a better life, my mother lived left my hometown and came to Shanghai alone. She was so brave and strong. We visited my mother twice every year during the Spring Festival and Summer holiday. Every time she was extremly happy when we were around her. She never refused any requests from my side.She wanted me and my brother to be happy. Even though my parents have been separating more than 15 years, they are their relationship is still very well. We treasure the time we stay together and love each other very much. My parents have contributed a lot for the warm family.
As time goes by, grey hairs come out their head and wrinkles occur on their face. I hope they can have a healthy and interesting life. :)

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