A Day In My Life

I get up at half past eight in the morning. I have a cup of milk with cocoa for breakfast. I don´t eat cookies.
After that, I take a shower and brush my teeth. 
I always eat at home with my family at two o´clock. We always eat in the living room while we watch tv.
After_lunch I study English in my bedroom.
We have dinner at half past eight or nine o´clock in the evening. I go to bed at half past eleven or twelve o´clock.

Sorry, but my English is very poor. (It won't be so for long!)
 
Kisses. Besos.

A day in my life

I get up at half eight in the morning.  For breakfast I have a cup of chocolate milk.  I don´t eat cookies. (or biscuits (outside of the US))
After breakfast, I have a shower and brush my teeth.
At two o´clock I always have lunch with my family at home.  We always eat in the living room while watching TV.
After lunch, I study English in my bedroom.
We have dinner at half eight or nine o´clock in the evening.  I go to bed at half eleven or twelve o´clock.

Sorry but my English is very poor.

kisses. Besos.

Nice work Cristina your English is good and will only improve the more you study and practice.  Well done.  Greetings from Ireland, Ger

A day in my life

I get up at half past eight in the morning. I have breakfast one cup of milk with cacao for breakfast. I don´t eat cookies. --esto no es la palabra correctamente. No sé que tú significas

After that, I have take a shower and i clean my teeth.
At two o´clock I alwais always eat in my house with my family. We Always we eat in the living room while we watch tv.
After the lunch i study english in muy my room.
We eat dinner at half past eight or nine o´clock in the evening. I go to bed at half past eleven or twelve o´clock.

Sorry, but my English is very poor.

kisses. Besos.

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Tú inglés es mejor de mi Español, asi no sé que esta es útil. Sobre el ducha, es correcto a escribir "have a shower," pero es mejor normál para escribir "take a shower." ¡Recordas que en inglés, necesitas un sujeto y un verbo en todos las frases! En total, tú ingles es bien y muy fácil para entender.

A day in my life

I get up at half past eight in the morning. For breakfast I drink one cup of milk with cacao. I don't eat cookies.
After that I have a shower and i clean my teeth.
At two o´clock I always eat in my house with my family. We always we eat in the living room while we watch tv.
After the lunch i study English in my room.
We eat dinner at half past eight or nine o´clock in the evening. I go to bed at half past eleven or twelve o´clock.

Sorry, but my English is very poor.

kisses. Besos.

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Good job! :D