This is my little practice of an english translation, please help me modify, thank you guys:)
At present, including the Beidou, there are 4 navigation systems in the world, the EU's "Galileo" system (China is participated in it), which will be deployed in 2013; Russia's "GLONASS" system in 2010 to complete work; for now, the United States’ GPS is the monopoly of navigation market. China wants to have a place to live in the area of the global satellite navigation, our Beidou navigation satellite system must have independent research and development, to vigorously develop the application of our satellite navigation system in the national security, the construction and development of economy, and people’s daily life in various areas etc. Navigation, positioning and timing services provide make the satellite navigation system become an important guarantee for transportation, finance, communications, electric power system’s efficient, stable, and safe operation. Especially in the financial and the power, as the lifeline of national economic construction and development, need to keep pace with the times, the earlier application of the satellite navigation system the better. Quite high in China "Beidou" navigation satellite domestic atomic clock’s stability, which daily changes only has 1/1000000000 of one seconds, It is play a vital role in the synchronization in electric power network time, and in the accurate time and accurate frequency granted entry. This paper introduces the composition of the Beidou satellite navigation system, as well as the principle of work, and analysing and comparing of the different characteristics of Beidou and GPS, GLONASS and Galileo those three satellite navigation system. The paper discussed the application of Beidou satellite navigation system in the field of financial and power, in the end, we also put forward some valuable suggestions for the problems and shortcomings of the Beidou satellite navigation system.
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翻译的很专业，向你学习了！
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At present there are 4 navigation systems in the world. These are China’s Beidou; the EU's Galileo system, which China has participated in, and that will be deployed in 2013; Russia's GLONASS system completed in 2010; and the United States’ GPS which currently has the monopoly of the navigation market.
China wants a place in the area of global satellite navigation. However, to achieve this, our Beidou navigation satellite system will require independent research and vigorous development. This will allow it to become an application for our satellite navigation systems in the cause of national security. The application will also benefit the construction and development of our economy, and help in various areas of people’s daily life and more.
Navigation, positioning and timing data available within satellite navigation systems can play an important role in the development of transportation, finance and communications, as well as helping to provide efficient, stable and safe operations of electric power systems. Therefore, as finance and power are lifelines of national economic construction and development, and need to keep pace with the times, the earlier the application of the Beidou the better.
Highly featured in the Beidou system is its domestic atomic clock’s stability. With daily changes of only 1/1000000000 of one second, it can play a vital role in the synchronization of electric power network time through the collection of highly accurate time and frequency data.
This paper introduces the composition of the Beidou satellite navigation system as well as the principle of its work. It analyses and compares the different characteristics of the Beidou against the GPS, GLONASS and Galileo systems. The paper also discusses the application of the Beidou satellite navigation system in the field of finance and power and puts forward some valuable suggestions in overcoming its problems and shortcomings.
There are some areas of your text that I was unclear of, however I have done my best to interpret the meanings and definitions as I saw them. Please feel welcome to ask if you have any questions.
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The text is a little long to do correction on the whole thing, but I think it would be helpful to break up your text into smaller paragraphs so that it is easier to read. Right now it is a really big block of text so it is hard to look at easily.
Besides that, be careful about the verb tense and conjugation you use. For example, "it is play a vital role ... " should be "It plays a vital role ...". Some of it feels like you might have used a translation program too.
Good job! Keep it up!
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