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Extroverted or Introverted I think it's very important to have friends. It is good for everyone to be an extroverted and o sociable person. There are more good points than bad ones. For example, it can be a bad thing for an extroverted person to trust everyone. That's a common mistake and we cannot always avoid it, because it depends on people. And every person is different in their own way. But, beside that, being a talkative person is very good for your moods and your feelings. It is true that sociable people are more smiling, lively, energic than introverted people. It is awesome to know that you have someone to trust, who you can tell your thoughts, your feelings, your secrets, your everything. Having friends helps you have an interesting life and helps you integrate in society. Don't you think the same?

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Extroverted or Introverted

I think it's very important to have friends. It is good for everyone to be an extroverted and sociable person. There are more good points than bad ones. For example, it can be a bad thing for an extroverted person to trust everyone. That's a common mistake and we cannot always avoid it, because it depends on the person/individual people. And ; every person is different in their own way.
But, Beside that, being a talkative person is very good for your moods and your feelings. It is true that sociable people are more smiling, lively, energic than introverted people.
It is awesome to know that you have someone to trust, who you can tell your thoughts, your feelings, your secrets, your everything. Having friends helps you have an interesting life and helps you integrate in society. Don't you think the same?

 

The English is just about perfect, but - too bad about the poor introverts! :D

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I believe in being extroverted, and already am. It's been hard to show others that I'm an extrovert. The best example I can think of, where an attempt to be an extrovert didn't work out, was when I started a Meetup group I hoped to gear towards bringing current and former post-secondary students. When it appeared memberships weren't taking off, I sent the following, via the LinkedIn group: "Please invite your friends to the above events. There are several spots left for the stand-alone GTACFUCCS coffee chats but only a single spot left for the coffee chat featuring GTACFUCCS, Toronto Region Business Networking and Accountants and Bookkeepers of Greater Toronto. Together, we can promote GTACFUCCS to a wide audience, hopefully without the need to put up 10,000s, if not 100,000s, of posters at various university and community college campuses." Looking back, I regret using the acronym (short for "Greater Toronto Area Current and Former University and Community College Students), which I later changed to GTACFPSS (substituting "University and Community College" with "Post-Secondary"), but don't regret trying to reach out to the legions of post-secondary students out there. After all, in far too many university courses, getting enough feedback, from course profs, as to assignment instructions, was difficult, and I hoped to be, to those post-secondary students, what I didn't get the benefit of: knowing, from students who had, before I'd taken certain university courses, taken those courses, the types of assignments I could expect to have to complete, and practical methods for completing them.

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