私のかれしい
私のかれしいは韓国人です。韓国で会えました。名前はスソンです。とても愛するよ！
１２月は私は東京に行きます、だからかれしいを会えます！今、私は一人で南アフリカに住んでいます。家族は東京です。＞＜
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私のかれしい
私のかれしいは韓国人です。韓国で会いました。名前はスソンです。とても愛してるよ！
１２月は私は東京に行きます、だからかれしいに会えます！今、私は一人で南アフリカに住んでいます。家族は東京にいます。＞＜
Not sure what you meant the last sentence. If you meant (someone's) family is in Tokyo, my correction is right.
Long distance relationship is hard. I feel you! One and half month, がんばれ！ :-)
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Sorry I cannot type Japanese and it's really annoying,
The last sentence makes people confused. What do you mean? Your family live in Tokyo? or Your family are from Tokyo? Maybe it's a mistake in grammar :)
And...your use of the word [meet] is wrong. JP word : a u should be transformed into a i ma shi ta/a i ma su.
I don't know whether you can understand me but...have a good day ~~~
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