My first record!

This is my first record here. I want to learn the English language! I await your help!

My first entry!

This is my first entry here. I want to learn English language! I am waiting for any help!

I changed 'record' to 'entry', although they both mean the same here the word entry would be more commonly used (for example 'an entry in a diary')

Capital E for English and no need to say language afterwards, we know what you mean!

I changed 'wait' to 'am waiting for' although the word 'await' would also work.