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Having the right roommate makes a flat better!
This year serves me also as a great scrutiny. I can have experienced a possibility to live alone, with one person in a flat and with one person in a room. I maintain that every order has their own advantages and disadvantages affecting them on a daily basis. Actually I'd like to write some words about the last combination. I must sincerely admit that I was really apprehensive about living with a new person nearby. What about privacy and at least a bit of calmness? It's a far-fetched conclusion that sharing a room always brings us many problems. Firstly it depends on the person, because I could say that my roommate and I are a team. Also we have a plethora of topics to discuss. Furthermore we won't be bored if that is the case! Although I wouldn't try living with a roommate once again, it was a great period, which was food for thought for me.
Hi Tomasz--Your writing and vocabulary are great! My corrections in green are mostly for things I would have said differently. As for the parts highlighted in orange, I wasn't really sure what you meant. For the first one, did you mean something like "This year I have had a lot to think about"?
For the part highlighted in purple, this doesn't really match the second half of that sentence. In the second half of the sentence you're talking about living with roommates, but in the first half it sounds like you're saying "I had the opportunity to live alone, but I didn't." Is that what you meant to say?
Hope this helps! -Alicia
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