My baby girl

I have a daughter, and her name is Eva. She is five years old now. She is a little bit fat, but super cute. She likes singing, drawing, dancing and reading - almost everything. She is a girl, but she never plays with dolls. She likes her big brother very much. I think her brother has been taught her a lot about boys' stuff, so she likes play toy cars and water guns,. Sometimes she acts like a boy. Most of girls like to cry, but not Eva - she is a very brave girl. I still remembered once she was riding a bike and she fell down from her bike, which I am sure it must have  hurt, but she didn't cry. She stood up and then kept riding her bike.  Anyway, she has brought a lot happiess into my life. I love her very much!

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My baby girl

I have a daughter. Her name is Eva. She is five years old now. She is a little bit fat, but super cute. She likes singing, drawing, dancing and reading... Almost everything. She is a girl, but she never plays with dolls. She likes her older brother very much. I think her brother has been taught her a lot about of boys stuff, so she likes to play with toy cars and water guns..... She sometimes she even acts like a boy. Most of girls like to cry, but not Eva.. She is a very brave girl. I still remembered when she was riding her bike, and she fells own from off her bike .. I am sure it must hurt, but she didn't cry. She stood up ,and then kept riding her bike .... Anyway, she has brought a lot of happiess into my life. I love her very much!