My week

My week was okay.I didn't do lot of things but today was a good day because it was aid a holiday for muslim people.I get up at 7 in the morning after that i went the mosque for aid prayer started at 8:30.after we got done i got to meet some people from my country and when i got home i called my family and wish them a happy holiday.in the evening my friend called me and he invited me to he's house.we had cafe fist and then dinner and around 9 i left and when home.

My week was okay. I didn't do much, but today was a good day because it was eid holiday for Muslim people. I got up at 7 in the morning, after that I went to the mosque for eid prayer, which started at 8:30. After we got done, I got to meet some people from my country. When I got home, I called my family and wished them a happy holiday. In the evening, my friend called and invited me to his house. We had coffee first, then dinner, and at around 9, I left and went home.

*Remember to capitalize proper nouns (I, Muslim). Also, remember to put a space between ending punctuations and the beginning of another sentence.  Instead of "eid," you could just use "it was a holiday for Muslim people." In that same sentence, you could just you "Muslims" instead of "Muslim people," but both are fine. 

Good job! :)

My week

My week was okay.I didn't do lot of things but today was a good day because it was aid a holiday for muslim people.I get up at 7 in the morning and after that I went the mosque for aid prayer starting at 8:30.After we got done i got to meet some people from my country and when i got home i called my family and wish wished them a happy holiday.in the evening my friend called me and he invited me to he's his house.we had cafe fist coffee first and then dinner and around 9 i left and when went home.

Good entry! Remember "I" and the first word of each sentence gets capitalized. 

My week

My week was okay. I didn't do lots of things much but today was a good day because it was aid, which is a holiday for muslim people. I got up at 7 in the morning. After that I went to the mosque for aid prayer. It started at 8:30. After we got done finished I got to meet some people from my country and when I got home I called my family and wished them a happy holiday. In the evening, my friend called me and he invited me to his house. We had cafe fist  coffee firstand then dinner and around 9 I left and when went home.

Use capital letter I for I (me) always even in the middle of a sentence

The letter after a full stop (period .) is always a capital