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My National Holiday I had an amazing holiday! The first two days I visited my friend's college in Aba, a beautiful place near Wenchuan. We ate many delicious foods there, such as spicy hot pot, omelette that I had not eaten before. We also had a barbecue, and shared a cake together. And, we went to the weekend party, many people danced there. And then, I went to home, preparing for buying a computer. The fourth day I went to visit my sister in hospital and bought a computer, not very expensive but useful. Finally! On the fifth day I stayed at home, some relatives visited us, we had a great time. And the sixth day I went to the amusement ground in Wenjiang(A city near Chengdu.) with another friend. We went on the roller coaster, bumper cars and many other thrill plays. My greatest thril went on the bungee jumping! It's my first time to try it, really scaring! I didn't have a good "performance", I guess, because I was too afraid. But I still want to try again someday, and maybe next time I'll try higher.

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My National Holiday

I had an amazing holiday! The first two days I visited my friend's college in Aba, a beautiful place near Wenchuan. We ate many delicious foods there, such as spicy hot pot, omelette that I had not eaten before. We also had a barbecue, and shared a cake together. And, we went to the weekend party, many people danced there. And then, I went to home, preparing to buy a computer. The fourth day I went to visit my sister in hospital and bought a computer, not very expensive but useful. Finally! On the fifth day I stayed at home, some relatives visited us, we had a great time. And the sixth day I went to the amusement ground in Wenjiang(A city near Chengdu.) with another friend. We went on the roller coaster, bumper cars and many other thrill plays. My greatest thril was on the bungee jumping! It's my first time to try it, really scary! I didn't have a good "performance", I guess, because I was too afraid. But I still want to try again someday, and maybe next time I'll try higher.

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You are braver than I am! I would be very scared to try bungee jumping. Good for you!
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My National Holiday

I had an amazing holiday! The first two days I visited my friend's college in Aba, a beautiful place near Wenchuan. We ate many delicious foods there, such as spicy hot pot, omelette that I had not eaten before. We also had a barbecue, and shared a cake together. And, we went to the weekend party, many people danced there. And then, I went to home, preparing for buying a computer. The fourth day I went to visit my sister in hospital and bought a computer, not very expensive but useful. Finally! On the fifth day I stayed at home, some relatives visited us, we had a great time. And the sixth day I went to the amusement ground in Wenjiang(A city near Chengdu.) with another friend. We rode the roller coaster, drove bumper cars and had many other thrill plays. My greatest thrill was the bungee jumping! It's my first time to try it, really scaring! I didn't have a good "performance", I guess, because I was too afraid. But I still want to try again someday, and maybe next time I'll try higher.

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amazing!

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