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TRAVELING I think that am a person with a lot of kilometres with the exception of this year that I am studying on Sweden, I haven’t travelled away from home in my life only now, normally I travel for Andalucía and for this reason, I know it completely. My father bought a good caravan, a Hobby, two years ago and I use it whenever I can, I remember a travel the past year, in September, I travelled to The Escullos, The Escullos is on Almeria and I didn’t know that Andalucía could have got beaches as beautiful, those beaches have got yellow sand, clear water and without people, that is the paradise, I travelled with my girlfriend and toured all around village, I could eat the best goat cheese and I have eaten a lot of cheese but never as good as this, exactly I bought it on San José, a beautiful village, in general the west of Almeria is a beautiful desert. I have could do travels as good as The Escullos a lot because I think that Andalucía is a paradise and now I miss it because although Sweden is also a beautiful country, it can’t compare with Spain, for our climate, our history and our people.

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TRAVELLING

I think i am a person whose travelled a lot with the exception of this year that I am studying in Sweden, I haven’t travelled away from home in my life, only now. Normally, I travel to Andalucía and i know it very well.

My father brought a good caravan, a Hobby, two years ago. I use it whenever I can, I remember when i travelled in September last year to The Escullos. The Escullos is on Almeria and I didn’t know that Andalucía had beaches that were so beautiful, those beaches had yellow sand, clear water and without people. Now that is paradise! I travelled with my girlfriend and toured all around the village, I ate the best goat cheese there, and I have eaten a lot of cheese but never as good as this. I bought it on San José, a beautiful village, to the west of Almeria is a beautiful desert.

I could do more trips to The Escullos, because I think that Andalucía is a paradise and now I miss it.  Sweden is also a beautiful country, although it can’t compare with Spain, our climate, our history and our people.

 

 

Great,

 

It was enoyable learning a bit about spain while correcting your writing!

 

Aloz :)

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