I love cold Today it was rainy, so cool ! The winter is coming! I enjoy walking in the cold rain, breathing the cold air. Cold climate makes the world fresh and cool, more comfortable than

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Tiffany Ye

I love cold Today it was rainy, so cool ! The winter is coming! I enjoy walking in the cold rain, breathing the cold air. Cold climate makes the world fresh and cool, more comfortable than warm districts. I like leggings, winter creates lots of challenges like that, why should we wear as stupid as a bear? It will bring about a good feeling to you to wear leggings to walk in the snow. Yes, a sense of victory, winning the winter! Rousseau said, what the winter gave to Russia is more than any religions did. The long and severe winter of Russia contributed to a large number of litterateurs and philosophers. Winter enable the human to enhance the capability of defeating the disasters. So, as the saying goes, if winter comes, can spring far behind?

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I love cold

Today it was rainy and very cool !

The winter is coming!

I enjoy walking in the cold rain, breathing the cold air.

Cold climate makes the world fresh and cool, more comfortable than warm districts.

I like leggings. Winter creates lots of challenges like that. Why should we wear as stupid as something that leaves bare legs? It will bring about a good feeling to you to wear leggings to walk in the snow.

Yes, a sense of victory, winning against the winter!

Rousseau said, what the winter gave to Russia is more than any religions did.

The long and severe winter of Russia contributed to a large volume of literature and a large number of philosophers.

Winter enables humans to enhance the capability of defeating the disasters.

So, as the saying goes, if winter comes, can spring far behind?

[Very good. Some of my changes were to make it sound more natural. You writing in some of those case was grammatically correct.]

@ M4rc0 Went1ng thank you !

I can see two errors, but I am leaving the correction to a native speaker, since I probably will not get everything out.. .[Winter enables the human race...]. .[can spring be far behind].

@pseudomonas haha , enjoy the winter ! playing snow like a child!

I agree with you, winter makes us more enthusiastic and stimmulate our body and mind too. I like winter and walking when it is raining under my umbrella, I like the sound of that silence mainly in the night. They are good moments to concentrate and focus, to study, to read, to watch something interesting at home. Welcome Winter.

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