10/8〜10/10 8th Octorber Madoka and I desined a girls' cafe's menu. An owner bought us a juice. We were satisfied that we could write it well very much. 9th I found two spiders in living room, a

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10/8〜10/10 8th Octorber Madoka and I desined a girls' cafe's menu. An owner bought us a juice. We were satisfied that we could write it well very much. 9th I found two spiders in living room, and ran away to my room because I was fierce, and then Mom let its go outside. 10th I worked in a girls' cafe for the first time. I was glad that I was praised by Madoka.

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10/8〜10/10

8th Octorber
Madoka and I designed a girls' cafe's menu.
And the owner bought us a juice.
We were satisfied that we could write it well very well.

9th
I found two spiders in the living room and we ran into my room because I was scared. Then my mom let its go outside.<Remember to put the subject---spider.>

Another way is: Then my mom release the spider out.

10th
I worked in a girls' cafe for the first time.
I was glad that I was praised by Madoka.

Yes!! Is this funny???

typo, diary

omg, is it a dairy?..

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