I have a new job

I have worked in a store for two years as an assistant supervisor.I really appreciate the experience including getting some knowledge about the industry, learning some skills of interpersonal communication and meeting a few good persons there in the past two years.But I got a chance to be a supervisor in a new company one week ago.And after the interview, I just made it.My new working place is really a good one--frensher air, better working atmosphere, more learning-time,etc.Now I have more time to see diverse news and improve my English in order to have our meetings smoothly.It seems like everyday is a sunny new day!

I Have A New Job

I have worked in a store for two years as an assistant supervisor. I really appreciate the experience of learning (including getting some knowledge) about the industry, gaining (learning) some interpersonal skills (of interpersonal communication) and meeting several kind (a few good) persons over (there in) the past two years.But, a week ago, I had the (got a) chance/opportunity  to become (be) a supervisor in a new company. (one) week ago.) Following (And after) the interview, I found I was successful (just made it). My new working place is really a good one--fresher (frensher) air, better working atmosphere, more learning-time,etc. Now I have more time to read up on news stories (see diverse news) and improve my English in order that (to have) our meetings run more smoothly. It seems like everyday will be (is) a sunny new day!

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