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My self introduction. Does it make sense?
Because letters are small and pretty hard to see when typing, and also because my English is still poor, I can't count how many times I've edited and rewritten my self introduction. Then finally I've got I had the idea to ask someone to check for me. I heard I can omit the subject and start with verbs when writing about myself, like keeping a diary (huh? who ever told you you cannot start with a verb?). Is it true? Does it make sense what I wrote make sense? (question-sentence word order) Or can you guess how what I am like? You can tell me any mistakes. Thank you in advance.
My self introduction;
Born and raised in Tokyo, a sociable and happy person I will (hahahaha now I understand!!! no, you still need the subject 'I') And never ever forget to try to understand your culture and background as long as I'm with you (the verb tense and person seemed strange here, but I think I worked it out). I love something new things and always try to develop and better myself ('better' is a verb in this use) better.
Graduated from the university majoring in psychology, And I've ('I' is the subject again) lived in Asia and U.S. for years. Now I'm now teaching cross cultural things during the day, and taking the night class to become a school teacher. I am eager to work for with teens to make them love to learning. I wonder how long it would will take though, maybe someday.
Driving, old American sitcoms, strong Chinese tea and Korean TVXQ always make me happy. And ice cream at night brings takes/transports me to the heaven ♪ (Ok you're brave and adventurous with the language, it's great! :D )
Well, is there anything more I can tell you more about me? Or anything else you want to ask me? Anyway, let's be friends♪ And (A few conjunctions starting sentences are ok. But not quite so many!!! haha) - tell me about yourself as well♪
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