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Cookies for Sale
Sonia: Ok, guys, we are ready to sell cookies. We have: 15 chocolate cookies, 10 vanilla and
8 strawberry.
Lleyson: Yes, come on, we need some money for our year-end tour.
Lets go to Alex's house, he loves cookies, he would buy a lot of them.
(knocking on the door)
Sonia: Hello.
Lleyson: Cookies for sale.
Alex: Go away I am not at home
Sonia: Yes, you are, I heard you
Alex: No, you didn't, this is a recording
Lleyson: No, it isn't a recording,
Alex: Yes it is, watch this, leave a message.
Lleison: Ok come on Soni, this man is stingy
Alex: Oh wait, do you have vanilla cookies?
Sonia: Yes we do
Alex: I will buy some cookies, please come in. Ok give me 5 vanilla, 5 chocolate and
4 strawberry.
Lleyson: Ok, 10 dollars please
Alex: I would like to see somebody else order that many cookies. Name one person who
ordered more cookies than me.
(counting money) Ok, here is the money.
Sonia: Thanks for your purchase. I hope to see you this week buying more cookies.
Alex: Of course.
Lleyson: Bye Alex, see you this week.
Sory, this was my first time correcting a composition, I forgot to mark the mistakes in the first version.
Great work and interesting story!
Cookies for sale
Sonia: Ok, guys We are ready to sell cookies. We have: 15 chocolate cookies, 10 vanilla and
8 strawberry.
Lleyson: Yes, come on, we need some money for our year-end tour.
Lets go to Alex's house, he loves cookies, he would buy a lot of them.
(knocking on the door)
Sonia: Hello.
Lleyson: Cookies for sale.
Alex: Go away, I am not at home
Sonia: Yes, you are, I heard you
Alex: No, you didn`t, this is a recording
Lleyson: No, it isn`t a recording,
Alex: Yes it is, watch it, leave a message.
Lleison: Ok come on Soni, this man is stingy
Alex: Oh wait, Do you have vanilla cookies?
Sonia: Yes we do
Alex: I will buy some cookies, please come in. Ok give me 5 vanilla, 5 chocolate and
4 strawberry.
Lleyson: Ok, 10 dollars please
Alex: I would like to see somebody else order that many cookies. Name one person who
ordered more cookies than me.
(counting money) Ok, here you have the money.
Sonia: Thanks for your purchase. I hope to see you this week buying more cookies.
Alex: Of course,
Lleyson: Bye Alex see you this week.
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