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Cookies for sale Sonia: Ok, guys We are ready to sale cookies. We have: 15 chocolate cookies, 10 of vanilla and 8 of strawberry. Lleyson: yes, come on, We need some money for our year-end tour. Lets go to Alex`s House, He loves cookies, he would buy a lot of them. (knocking door) Sonia: Hello. Lleyson: cookies for sale. Alex: go away I am not at home Sonia: Yes, you are, I heard you Alex: No, you didn`t, this is a recording Lleyson: No, it isn`t a recording, Alex: Yes it is, watch is, leave a message. Lleison: Ok come on Soni, This man is stingy Alex: Oh wait, Do you have vanilla cookies? Sonia: Yes we have Alex: I will buy some cookies, please come in, ok give me 5 from vanilla, 5 from chocolate and 4 from strawberry. Lleyson: Ok, 10 dollars please Alex: I would like to see somebody else order that many cookies. Name one person who ordered more cookies that me, (counting money) Ok, here you have the money. Sonia: thank for your purchase. I hope see you this week buying more cookies. Alex: Off course, Lleyson: Bye Mr Alex see you this week.

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Cookies for Sale

Sonia: Ok, guys, we are ready to sell cookies. We have: 15 chocolate cookies, 10 vanilla and

8  strawberry.

Lleyson: Yes, come on, we need some money for our year-end tour.

Lets go to Alex's house, he loves cookies, he would buy a lot of them.

(knocking on the door)

Sonia: Hello.

Lleyson: Cookies for sale.

Alex: Go away I am not at home

Sonia: Yes, you are, I heard you

Alex: No, you didn't, this is a recording

Lleyson: No, it isn't a recording,

Alex: Yes it is, watch this, leave a message.

Lleison: Ok come on Soni, this man is stingy

Alex: Oh wait, do you have vanilla cookies?

Sonia: Yes we do

Alex: I will buy some cookies, please come in. Ok give me 5 vanilla, 5 chocolate and

4 strawberry.

Lleyson: Ok, 10 dollars please

Alex: I would like to see somebody else order that many cookies. Name one person who

ordered more cookies than me.

(counting money) Ok, here is the money.

Sonia: Thanks for your purchase. I hope to see you this week buying more cookies.

Alex: Of course.

Lleyson: Bye Alex, see you this week.

 

 

Sory, this was my first time correcting a composition, I forgot to mark the mistakes in the first version.

Great work and interesting story!

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Cookies for sale

Sonia: Ok, guys We are ready to sell cookies. We have: 15 chocolate cookies, 10 vanilla and

8 strawberry.

Lleyson: Yes, come on, we need some money for our year-end tour.

Lets go to Alex's house, he loves cookies, he would buy a lot of them.

(knocking on the door)

Sonia: Hello.

Lleyson: Cookies for sale.

Alex: Go away, I am not at home

Sonia: Yes, you are, I heard you

Alex: No, you didn`t, this is a recording

Lleyson: No, it isn`t a recording,

Alex: Yes it is, watch it, leave a message.

Lleison: Ok come on Soni, this man is stingy

Alex: Oh wait, Do you have vanilla cookies?

Sonia: Yes we do 

Alex: I will buy some cookies, please come in. Ok give me 5 vanilla, 5 chocolate and

4 strawberry.

Lleyson: Ok, 10 dollars please

Alex: I would like to see somebody else order that many cookies. Name one person who

ordered more cookies than me. 

(counting money) Ok, here you have the money.

Sonia: Thanks for your purchase. I hope to see you this week buying more cookies.

Alex: Of course,

Lleyson: Bye Alex see you this week.

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