introduce

Hi,everyone!My name is angel.I plan to go abroad next year and prepare the ielts recently!So i want to find the language partner who will help me english!Because i should get the 7 on this test!In fact it's hard to me and my grammar was not good!I will write some composition on this web!Hope everyone can correct it!Thanks!

Introduction

Hi,everyone!My name is Angel.I plan to go abroad next year and have been preparing for (prepare) the ielts recently!So I am looking for a (i want to find the) language partner who will help me with English! (Because) I (i) need to (should get the) score  7 in (on) this test! In fact it's hard for (to) me as (and) my grammar is (was) not good! I will write some compositions on this website! Hope everyone can correct it! Thanks

introduce Introduction

Hi, everyone! My name is Angel. I plan to go abroad next year and prepare are preparing myself for the IELTS exam recently!, so I want to find the a language partner who will help me practise my English because I should get the a band score of 7 on this test. In fact, it's hard to me and, in addition, my grammar was not good! is not good enough. I will write some compositions on this web and hope everyone can correct it! them. Thanks!