a bad day
The exam result is coming out this afternoon，I flunked，so did my best two friends. We all felt spiritless, Tell the turth,we three all don't love to study.And,we are constantly skipping classes、drinking 、smoking and staying out all night... But today，i am really in a bad mood，we decided by consensus to drink alcohol .I'm so upset to write any more.That's all.
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A Bad Day
The exam resultYou really should begin sentences with "and"
"but" is used when something different is going to happen.. so you were talking about how skipping class, smoking, drinking, and staying out affected you and then you said "but" today I am in a really bad mood. "but" wouldn't be used here.. you can say "so" . "so" is should the result i guess you can say.. if you were going "but" you would say " But" now I have learned my lesson. ---> a change of heart
"so" would be used saying "so" now i am in a really bad mood. ---> a result
[i hope you can understand.. i'm not too sure how to explain.. i'll explain better when we talk if you want..]
babbby!!! i'm sorry you fail.. maybe you should try to do less off the skipping class, drinking, smoking and staying out late.. Even if you don't like to study at least try.. :) ..take care!
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