The story of you

I(if you want to use I'm then you must use continous form like " I'm currently feeling tired) currently feel tired of the status of what I am, but I'm trying to find a goal for my life.
Everyone has their own characteristics, but each individual is like a mirror and you can see there're might be some small parts are (no need to use are) similar to yours. I believe through discuss to discussion with other people, might help you to refresh your values, make the generate new ideas happen.
If you are willing to share your experience of how you find your goal, and how you reach it, or even you are confused like me too, send me message if you want to share you story with me.
I'm thinking about that this process to can inspire me to do something, and I hope in the future I can turn it into a small illustration project, commemorate the cogitation about me and the friends who join this project in late of 2013.
Coco Chanel found her passion and eventually succeded in fashion, Steve Jobs went down in history of his innovative thinking, maybe we can't be as famous as they are, but what's your dream and passion for life, what makes you special and meaningful?

The story of you

I'm currently feeling tired of the status of what I am, but I'm trying to find my life goal.
Everyone has their own characteristics, but each individual, also like a mirror, and you can see there're (No such word/contraction as "there're". You would just write out "there are". You wouldn't use it in this sentence anyway.) might be some small parts are similar to yours. I believe through discussion to with other people might help you refresh your values and make the new idea happen.
If you are willing to share your experience of how you find your goal, and how you reach it, or if even you are confused like me do, send me message if you want to share your story with me.
I'm thinking about through this process to inspire me something and I hope in the future I can turn it into a small illustration project to commemorate the cogitation (I think you mean "cognition". This wouldn't be a good place to use that word. I think you meant "thought". I would try rewording the sentence to make it clearer to the reader.) about me and the friends who's join this project in late of 2013.
Coco Chanel found her passion and eventually success on in fashion. Steve Jobs go went down in history of for his innovative thinking. Maybe we can't be as famous as they did were, but what's your dream and passion for life? What makes you special and meaningful?

Overall, your writing is very good. Try working on the sentence structure. A lot of your sentences went on too long and became confusing. Breaking up sentences like I did to some of the above will help. Start with one subject and one verb and work up to more sophisticated sentences once you've mastered the simpler ones. Also, make sure the tenses stay uniform. You changed from past tense to present tense in the middle of the sentence and that gets confusing. Very good job :)