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Nowadays the majority of people suppose that studying foreign languages influences their life, however others believe that it does not
In my point of view this problem belongs to is a question of social aspect (what is 'social aspect'?) . I am concerned (considering whether ...?) that studying foreign languages can change our life. (the first two questions seem to say nothing ...) Firstly, I consider that knowledge of languages can help you getting a well-paid job, because in this case a lot of opportunities will be available for you,  regardless of your professional activities. Moreover, a man, who speaks several some languages well, is valued in the labour market (isn't this repeating the previous point?). Secondly, if you like travelling, knowledge of the language makes your life easier. Furthermore you can move in to other country, where level of life the standard of living is higher. In addition to this I want to say that people who studyies languages, they can broaden their horizons, explore other cultures, develop and acquire knowledge and skills.

Some of these IELTS questions are pretty awful to have to answer, aren't they!

On the other side, some people believe that languages have no impact on their lives. They point to the fact that they do not travel and do not communicate on the Internet with foreigners, so they do not need to learn languages. After all, there is no need for them to study the languages because all mass media products are translated into their native language, and if they ever want to translate something, in the Internet these people they can use online translators. However So, I can't agree with that point, because people, who are not interested in self-development ( learning languages), they are narrow-minded, so they can not objectively assess if whether knowledgeing of languages would impact on their lives. (however for such people, perhaps they can say it has no impact)
In conclusion I can say that learning foreign languages does play an important role in our lives. We do not have should not make disparagingly references to/remarks about these skills.

Can you correct mistakes in my composition ?)
Nowadays the majority of people suppose that studying foreign languages influences their life. However, others believe that it does not.
In my point of view, this problem belongs to social aspect. I am concerned that studying foreign languages can change our life. Firstly,I consider that knowledge of languages can help you in getting a well-paid job, because in this case a lot of opportunities will be available to you ,regardless of your professional activities. Moreover, a man,who speaks some languages well, is valued in the labour market. Secondly, if you like traveling, knowledge of the language makes your life easier. Furthermore, you can move to other country ,where level of life is higher. In addition to this I want to say that people,who study languages can broaden their horizons,explore other cultures, develop, and acquire knowledge and skills.
On the other side , some people believe that languages have no impact on their lives. They point to the fact that they do not travel, do not communicate on the Internet with foreigners, so they do not need to learn languages. After all, there is no need for them to study the languages because all mass media products are translated into their native language, and if they ever wanted to translate something on the Internet these people use online translators. So, I can't agree with that point, because people, who are not interested in self-development ( learning languages), they are narrow-minded,so they can not objectively assess if knowledge of languages impact their lives.
In conclusion I can say that learning foreign languages plays an important role in our lives.We do not have disparagingly references to these skills. (the last sentence is a bit confusing.
 

Can you correct mistakes in my composition ?)

Nowadays the majority of people suppose that studying foreign languages influences their life. However, others believe that it does not.
In my point of view, this problem belongs to social aspect. I am concerned that studying foreign languages can change our life. Firstly,I consider that knowledge of languages can help you in getting a well-paid job, because in this case a lot of opportunities will be available to you ,regardless of your professional activities. Moreover, a man,who speaks some languages well, is valued in the labour market. Secondly, if you like traveling, knowledge of the language makes your life easier. Furthermore, you can move to other country ,where level of life is higher. In addition to this I want to say that people,who study languages can broaden their horizons,explore other cultures, develop, and acquire knowledge and skills.
On the other side , some people believe that languages have no impact on their lives. They point to the fact that they do not travel, do not communicate on the Internet with foreigners, so they do not need to learn languages. After all, there is no need for them to study the languages because all mass media products are translated into their native language, and if they ever wanted to translate something on the Internet these people use online translators. So, I can't agree with that point, because people, who are not interested in self-development ( learning languages), they are narrow-minded,so they can not objectively assess if knowledge of languages impact their lives.
In conclusion I can say that learning foreign languages plays an important role in our lives.We do not have disparagingly references to these skills. (the last sentence is a bit confusing :)