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Could someone review this email? THANK YOU!! Dear Emily: Thank you for invited me for a weekend with your family. I’m sorry, I would like to go but I can’t. There is a party of Renewable Energies in the city these weekend, and I will have to work. See you soon.

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Could someone review this email? THANK YOU!!

Dear Emily:

Thank you for invited me for a weekend with your family.
I’m sorry, I would like to go but I can’t.
There is a party of Renewable Energies in the city these weekend, and I will have to work.

See you soon.

 

Dear Emily,

 

Thank you for inviting me / your invitation (invited me) to spend (for) a weekend with your family.

 

Although I would love to meet you all, I’m sorry I will be unable to attend (would like to go but I can’t.) as there is a party at (of) Renewable Energies in the city this (these) weekend, and, therefore,     I will be required (have) to work / they will need me to work. 

 

Anyway, I hope we can meet again (See you) soon.

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Thank you very much Chloe Nguyen!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Could I help you?
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In my opinion, you should write : Dear Emily, Thank you for inviting me to have a weakend with your family. I would like to come but I am not able to because there is a party of Renewable Energies in my city that weakend and I have to work. I am really sorry. Hope to have another chance to be with your family. See you soon, * I am a freshman and this is my first time to leave a comment so if there is any mistake please let me know. Hope this will help :).

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