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Deforestationi When I was young, I always hear the phrase "If you cut down a tree, you should plant two trees" in this time I supposed all the people fallow this rule, because I enjoy very much went to activities like plant trees with my teachers and friends in scholl times. Sadly, while I've growing I notice people don't care about that rule and when the time past I saw how more and more the green places around my city have been vanished Then much more older I beggan to hear about Global Warming and the effect in the wheater. It's too obvious the dammage, we can see how the wheater is completely different than many years ago. Deforestation, for agriculture, logging industries and probably ourserlves contribute in the dammage I'm not an activist, (I'm far to be one), but I bealive we can apport little things for help the planet, we can help the nature and improve our enviroment, for my part I'm still enjoy plant trees, no all the time but a try to do this almost 1 tree per year. :) thanks for your corrections

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Deforestationi

When I was young, I always heard the phrase "If you cut down a tree, you should plant two trees." In this time I supposed all the people followed this rule, because I enjoyed very much going to activities like planting trees with my teachers and friends in school times.

Sadly, while I've growing, I notice people don't care about that rule and as the time passed I saw how more and more the green places around my city have been vanished

Then much more older, I began to hear about Global Warming and the effect in the weather. The damage is too obvious the dammage, and we can see how the weather is completely different than many years ago. Deforestation from agriculture, logging industries and probably ourserlves contribute to the damage

I'm not an activist, (I'm far from one, in fact), but I belive we can support little things to help the planet. We can help the nature and improve our enviroment. For my part, I still enjoy planting trees, not all the time, but trying to do this almost 1 tree per year. :)

Thanks for your corrections

 

[Good work.  You need to shorten your sentences and not string so many together with commas.]

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