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dangerous foods
A lot of people have an opinion, that the basic part of food, which we are eating, is dangerous for us. And when I think about this problem, I realize that it can be true, unfortunately. But it is complex issue, and depends on how each of us cares about his health. Why people think in this way?
First of all, we can say that our usual food consist a lot of artificial additives and colors, especially, it is true for fast and processed food. In my mind, all this stuff is extremely unhealthy for you. I know, that we have to use it, because nowadays products are transported on the long distances, you can buy a meal from another country or even another part of the world. But we can solve this problem through the creation of meals in your area, for instance, I have heard that there are a lot of projects of vertical farming, which can produce crops right in a city.
The second thing is food may contain a lot of sugar, cholesterol and pesticides. Of course, we like these types of food, because they are tasty, have fantastic, usually artificial flavor and so on, but on the other hand, unhealthy and even dangerous for us.
Thirdly, I have to say, that each of us can make a choice, I mean, we still can eat healthy meals, for example, vegetables and fruits, cook at home from fresh products, and even grow them in our own croft. As for me, I have house with croft in my own town, and each summer I eat fresh vegetables.
In conclusion, I'm going to say, that there are a lot of problems with food, but we still have a possibilities to eat healthy meal, and as much as I can I would try to find these possibilities.
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dangerous foods
A lot of people have an opinion, that the basic part of a food, which we are eating, is dangerous for us. And when I think about this problem, I realize that it can be true, unfortunately. But it is complex issue, and depends on how each of us cares about his health. Why people think in this way?
First of all, we can say that our usual food consist a lot of artificial additives and colors, especially, it is true for fast and processed food. In my mind, all this stuff is extremely unhealthy for you. I know, that we have to use it, because nowadays products are transported on the long distances, you can buy a meal from another country or even another part of the world. But we can solve this problem through the creation of meals in your area, for instance, I have heard that there are a lot of projects of vertical farming, which can produce crops right in a city.
The second thing is food may contain a lot of sugar, cholesterol and pesticides. Of course, we like these types of food, because they are tasty, have fantastic, usually artificial flavor and so on, but on the other hand, unhealthy and even dangerous for us.
Thirdly, I have to say, that each of us can make a choice, I mean, we still can eat healthy meal, for example, vegetables and fruits, cook at home from fresh products, and even grow them in our own croft. As for me, I have house with croft in my own town, and each summer I eat fresh vegetables.
In conclusion, I'm going to say, that there are a lot of problems with food, but we still have a possibilities to eat healthy meal, and as much as I can I would try to find these possibilities.
You know it is very hard to select eligible foods for your family in the supermarket . Almost every food was contaminated by artificial additives or even chemicals . I did not notice how serious this problem is . Since I went to supermarket to purchase daily food one day for my family , I found so many foods are not so favorable as advetisement . For winning your purchase , the producer would do everything to win your trust by color ,taste or favour .Needless to say , the natural food cannot give you so much possibility so as a consequeuce , no wonder they are so eager to add some artificial substance in their food to favour its taste . At present , I turn around to buy raw materials to cook on my own ,and I wish I could eat more healthful and not poisoned by so many terrible foods in the market .
Dangerous Foods
A lot of people believe that the basic foods, which we are eating are dangerous for us. And when I think about this problem, I realize that unfortunatly, it can be true. But it is a complex issue, and it depends on how much we care about our health. Why do people think this way?
First of all, we can say that our usual food consist of a lot of artificial additives and colors, especially, in fast and processed food. In my mind, all of this stuff is extremely unhealthy for you. I know that we have to use it, because nowadays products are transported long distances, you can buy a meal from another country or even another part of the world. But we can solve this problem through the creation of meals in your area, for instance, I have heard that there are a lot of projects of vertical farming, which can produce crops right in a city.
The second thing is food may contain a lot of sugar, cholesterol and pesticides. Of course, we like these types of foods, because they are tasty, have fantastic, usually artificial flavor and so on, but on the other hand, they are unhealthy and even dangerous for us.
Thirdly, I have to say, that each of us can make a choice, I mean, we still can eat healthy meals, for example, vegetables and fruits, cook at home with fresh products, and even grow them in our own croft. As for me, I have house with croft in my own town, and each summer I eat fresh vegetables.
In conclusion, I'm going to say, that there are a lot of problems with food, but we still have possibilities to eat healthy meals, and as much as I can I would try to find these possibilities.
Good job! :)
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