Search from various English teachers...
Vietnam flagĐoàn
Dude I like you I like this guy so much and I have no idea where to write about it. I think about him and I want to talk about him all the time but I don't want my friends to be bored with my stories about that guy. I really want to tell him that I'm having a big crush on him and he is so perfect to me but it's still soon to let him know. I don't want him to be scared of me because we just met last week and went out for 1 time. I know he likes me too but I'm not confident enough to make sure, although whenever I'm with him I always try to look confident but deep inside I'm a chicken, I'm afraid he will like someone prettier than me. He asked me out yesterday, and this morning we had breakfast together too. He introduced me his favorite food in the city but I didn't like it and I couldn't finish it, I told him I was full but later I bought an ice-cream and that was so stupid of me because he found out that I pretended to be full. I know the whole story sounds stupid and I sounds like a teenager who has a crush for the first time..

Corrections · 1

1

Dude I like you

I like this guy so much and I have no idea where to write about him. I think about him a lot and I want to talk about him all the time, but I don't want my friends to be bored with my stories about my infaturation that guy. I really want to tell him that I have having a big crush on him and he is so perfect for me, but it's still soon to let him know. I don't want him to be scared of me because we just met last week and went on our first date.

I know he likes me, too. But I'm not confident enough to make sure, although except Whenever I'm with him I always try to look more confident, but deep inside I'm a chicken. I'm afraid he will be attracted to like someone prettier than me. He asked me out yesterday and this morning we had breakfast together too. He introduced me to his favorite food in the city, but I didn't like it, and I couldn't finish it. So I told him I was full then later I bought an ice-cream. (Which was so stupid of me because he found out that I pretended to be full.) I know the whole story sounds stupid and I sounds like a teenager who has a crush for the first time.

----------------------------------------

TOO MANY "BUT"

TOO MANY COMMAS

What I did: I shorted many sentences. I added some words "Which, So, then, more...."

 

 

Want to progress faster?

Join this learning community and try out free exercises!

Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!

Start Learning Today