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talk about a subject (i need your help^^)thank you! looking forward to receiving your modification~ Firstly, economics is the core of state construction, and economics is surrounded by every walks of life. In the second place, Germany is a famous developed industrial country whose economic strength can harvest the first place in Europe. The trade relation between Germany and China is great, Germany is Chinese largest trading partner in Europe. In addition, China is the fifth largest exporter of Germany and China is the second largest importer of Germany. Thirdly, the economic status of China has been increasing in the world. Talented persons who grasp Chinese, English and German are required in nowadays. I choose to learn German and Eonomics in the UK because I want to use quality educational resource and enjoy famous educational level to learn German. German and English are from the same language family, using English teaching methods to learn German is more direct. My main aim is to Grasp English and German well while studying economics. Besides, learning economics is much more vital than learning a skill, it can help people not only think of problems more wisely but also have a long-term viewpoint in our lives. Moreover, my father has been a chairman in a real estate development company for more than 10 years. He always teaches me something about the ways of operating company and getting alone with others. So I would like to learn this course to help me reach a higher platform and have an opportunity to work in a multinational corporation.

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talk about a subject (i need your help^^)thank you! looking forward to receiving your modification~

Firstly, economics is the core of state construction (this can be better defined), and economics is surrounded by every walks of life. In the second place, Germany is a famous developed industrial country whose economic strength can harvest the first place in Europe. The trade relation between Germany and China is great, Germany is Chinese  China's largest trading partner in Europe. In addition, China is the fifth largest exporter of to Germany and China is the second largest importer of Germany German goods. Thirdly, the economic status of China has been increasing in the world. Talented persons people who grasp Chinese, English and German are required in nowadays valuable employees.

I choose chose to learn German and Eonomics in the UK because I want to use have a good education quality educational resource. and enjoy famous educational level to learn German. (I don't understand this) German and English are from the same language family, using English teaching methods to learn German is more direct very useful. My main aim is to grasp English and German well while studying economics. Besides, learning economics is much more vital than learning a skill (what type of skill are you referring to?), it can help people not only think of problems more wisely but also have a long-term viewpoint in our lives. Moreover, my father has been a chairman in a real estate development company for more than 10 years. He always teaches me something about the ways of operating company and getting alone along with others. So I would like to learn from this course to help me reach a higher platform and have an opportunity to work in a multinational corporation.

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