A short self-introduction for an interview

Hello everyone, I am glad to be here to participate in the Shanghai General Motors interview. Please remember me, my Chinese name is Chenlei and my English name is July. I will be a graduate in June 2014.6. Now is still a senior in I am in my final year at Shanghai University. I have many hobbies such as travelling, reading and drawing. I always help each others and try to spread happiness for to people who feel sad. In On campus I worked as a cadres in for the psychological association (I don't think this is the correct term in English). Also, I am also a volunteer in the on Metro Line Seven and for Popular Science Day. In addition, I have worked as an intern in at 51job (what is this?) and Zhanfeng Auto Parts company. So I have accumulated a lot of practical experience in the past time. My presentation is over and I am looking forward to your exchanging of our experiences,if you want to give me.

It is not clear from your writing whether you did your work experince placements in the past or whether they are continuing in the present. I have changed your text to what I think you mean, although I cannot be sure. Also - very important - you MUST insert a space after a comma or full stop! Not doing so is really annoying for native-English speakers who are reading your work.