THE MIDI MUSIC FESTIVAL
Yesterday，I went to Pudong，shanghai to attend the MIDI music festival.There were so many people love Rock who worn strange clothes and dyed their hair in different colors.Inclement weather could not stopping audiences‘ love for Rockers.We were swing with the music in the lively atmosphere.Although the band may not be very famous but their spirit for music made us realize what is ROCK.
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THE MIDI MUSIC FESTIVAL
Yesterday，I went to Pudong，s Shanghai to attend the MIDI music festival. There were so many people love Rock rock lovers who worn wore strange clothes and dyed their hair in different colors. Inclement weather could not stopping stop the audiences‘ audience's love for the R rockers. We were swing swinging with the music in the lively atmosphere. Although the band may not be very famous, but their spirit for music made us realize what is ROCK. ROCK is.
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Your English is very good. I just made a few changes. The change to the last sentence might confuse you because I changed it so that the sentence ends with a preposition, but this is acceptable if the sentence would not otherwise make sense.
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