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My home town. I was born and grew up in beautiful place, Almaty. This is the very big city in the south-east of the country. Almaty was built by the Russian Army in 1854. The name "Almaty" translate like "apple-tree", because before in the city grew up apple and weight of each apple was about 1 kg. More than three thousand years people live in the territory of Almaty. Archaeologists found many ancient objects and the most famous discovery this is The Golden Man. This is the skeleton of a man or woman 18 years,he belonged to the royal family and this man lived in the 7th century BC. The skeleton was dressed in a gold dress. In my city live over 1.5 million people of different nationalities and religions. Before Almaty was capital city, now it's Astana. Still Almaty is center of economy and culture. In the city's many parks, lakes, rivers.The city is surrounded by high mountains. In the mountains are many waterfalls, glacial lakes, forests. High up in the mountains there is an outdoor ice rink, an observatory, a ski resort. In the mountains live animals and grow plants, many of which are recorded in the Red Book. I miss my city and always look forward to seeing him....

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My home town.

I was born and grew up in a beautiful place, Almaty. This It is the a very big city in the south-east of the country Kazkistan. ( you must first inroduce the country you are talking about). Almaty was built by the Russian Army in 1854. The name "Almaty" is translated like as "apple-tree", because before apple trees grew up in the current place of the city in the past, and the weight of each apple was about 1 kg. 

Perhaps, about more than three thousand years before, there were people lived in the territory of current Almaty. Archaeologists have found many ancient objects, and the most famous of their discoveries  is "The Golden Man". This It is the skeleton of an 18 year old man or woman ,he belonged to the who was a member of royal family and this man lived in the 7th century BC. The skeleton was dressed in a golden dress. 

 live Over 1.5 million people of from different nationalities and religions live in my city. Before Almaty was the capital city of kazakistan in the past, but now it's Astana. Still Almaty is a center of economy and culture. 

 There are many parks, lakes, and rivers in the city.The city is surrounded by high mountains. In the mountains, there are many waterfalls, glacial lakes, and forests. High up in the mountains there is are an outdoor ice rink, an observatory, and a ski resort. Many live animals and grow plants which live and grow in the mountains, many of which are have been recorded in the Red Book ( you are thinking just in kazaki and tanslating words in the same order, dağlarda ............). 

I miss my city and always look forward to seeing him....

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