About myself
My name is Sasha. I am 14 years old. I’m in the ninth grade at school. I live with my grandmother and grandfather. I have brown hair and brown eyes. Body type is average, growth is small. I like to learn. Of school subjects like history, biology and literature. I have a hobby: I like to draw. Sometimes I play football with my friends.Also I like listening to music I have few friends. My friends are kind and sympathetic. I often help my friends. My favorite season is winter. My favorite season is winter. Because in winter you can ski. I like New Year holidays.
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I just want to change some minor details to help you reconstruct your entry to make it simpler. You are pretty good in English considering you are just 14.
About myself
My name is Sasha, I live with my grandparents. I am 14 years old and I'm currently in the ninth grade. I have brown hair and brown eyes with average body built. My favorite subjects at school are history, biology and literature. My hobbies include drawing, playing some occasional football with my friends and listening to music. I have few friends, they are kind and sympathetic and we help each other alot. Winter is my favorite season because I can ski and I like New Year holidays too.
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About myself
My name is Sasha. I am 14 years old. I’m in the ninth grade at school. I live with my grandmother and grandfather. I have brown hair and brown eyes. Body type is average, growth is small (I am short). I like to learn. Of school subjects like (From the school subjects i prefer) history, biology and literature. I have a hobby: I like to draw. Sometimes I play football with my friends.Also I like listening to music I have few friends (new sentence and should be "I have a few friends"). My friends are kind and sympathetic. I often help my friends. My favorite season is winter. My favorite season is winter. (this can be removed as double and should not start with the word because) Because in winter you can ski. I like New Year holidays.
If you want to know the reason behind the corrections just ask :) Ross
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About myself
My name is Sasha. I am 14 years old. I’m in the ninth grade at school. I live with my grandmother and grandfather. I have brown hair and brown eyes. My body type is average, and I'm short. I like to learn. My favorite school subjects are history, biology and literature. I have a hobby: I like to draw. Sometimes I play football with my friends. I also like listening to music. I have few friends. My friends are kind and sympathetic. I often help my friends. My favorite season is winter. My favorite season is winter because you can ski. I like New Year holidays.
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