Corrections · 2
My introduction
Hello. I'm Julio Cesare. Actually I'm studying english for various reason, but the main reason is that the english is very beautiful and necessary. I need friends that help me so much in english and to be friendly also..
english - Always use a capital letter with languages - English
various reason - "various" is more than one (plural) so "reason" must be plural too - various reasons
the english - Again, "english" should be with a capital letter. Also, don't add "the" unless there is another word added - English or the English language
necessary - It's OK, but feels incomplete. Better to add a reason, for example, for my job or for my future. Otherwise, you could just add for me.
and to be friendly also - You can either use "too" at the end of the sentence (and to be friendly too) or and to also be friendly.
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