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Should Rich Nations Offer Aids to Poorer Nations? Alongside with the mighty development of human civilazation, the global economy has polarized itself into the wealthy nations and the poorer ones. While the more prosperous nations can offer advanced quality in many life aspects, ranging from employment, welfare, social facilities, education to healthcare; their unfortunate neighbors many be struggling themselves out of hunger, illiterateness and even survival. From my point of view, it is presumable that the government of those richer nations should send their help to those poorer ones. For many years, there have been continuous aids in many aspects from the developed countries to the developing countries whose average GPA per capita is only around 500-1000USD. Let take Vietnam as an example. Every years, Vietnamese students are offered direct aids in education through no less than ten government scholarships from Europe, USA and Japan. In military, smaller countries like us may be in danger of external invasion just because we can hardly afford the cost of new technologies and equipment. And larger nations may supply these armed facilities directly at no cost or with ODA loan. Besides, the rich government can give aid of economics to their poorer counterparts in many ways. The Japan government has a long-term historic relationship with Vietnamese people because of their helping hand in many projects, considerably Can Tho bridges and HCMC Metroline just to name a few. Apart from bilateral aids, there are many NGO projects aiming to deliver help to those who need special care of the society. These NGO branches appear nearly everywhere in the world, even in war territories to give fresh water, medicine, food at refuge camps. In remoted or highland areas of developing countries, educational projects has been running across distance and over many adversities. In conclusion, any growth must always be followed with the polarization, creating an income gap between nations and people. However, by sending a helping hand to the poorer nations, the rich government can ensure a sustainable development in global scale.

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Should Rich Nations Offer Aids to Poorer Nations?
Alongside with the mighty development of human civilazation, the global economy has polarized itself into the wealthy nations and the poorer ones. While the more prosperous nations can offer advanced quality in many life aspects, ranging from employment, welfare, social facilities, education to healthcare; their unfortunate neighbors many be struggling themselves out of with hunger, illiterateness and even survival. From my point of view, it is presumable that the government of those richer nations should send their help to those poorer ones.

For many years, there have has been a continuous flow of aids in many aspects from the developed countries to the developing countries whose average GPA GDP per capita is only around 500-1000USD. Let's take Vietnam as an example. Every years, Vietnamese students are offered direct aids in education through no less than ten government scholarships from Europe, USA and Japan. In military, smaller countries like us may be in danger of external invasion just because we can hardly afford the cost of new technologies and equipment. And Larger nations may supply these armed facilities directly at no cost or with an ODA loan. Besides, the rich government can give economic aid of economics to their poorer counterparts in many ways. The Japanese government has a long-term historic relationship with Vietnamese people because of their helping hand in many projects, considerably such as Can Tho bridges and HCMC Metroline just to name a few.

Apart from bilateral aids, there are many NGO projects aiming to deliver help to those who need special care of the society. These NGO branches appear nearly everywhere in the world, even in war territories, to give fresh water, medicine and food at refuge camps. In remoted or highland areas of developing countries, educational projects [has been running across distance and over many adversities.] < Try rephrasing this.

In conclusion, any growth must always be followed by with the polarization, creating an income gap between nations and people. However, by sending a helping hand to the poorer nations, the rich government can ensure a sustainable development in on a global scale.

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Should Rich Nations Offer Aids to Poorer Nations?

Alongside with the mighty development of human civilazation, the global economy has polarized itself into the wealthy nations, and the poorer ones. While the more prosperous nations can offer advanced quality in many life aspects, ranging from employment, welfare, social facilities, education to healthcare; their unfortunate neighbors many be struggling themselves out of hunger, illiterateness and even survival. From my point of view, it is presumable that the government of those richer nations should send their help to those poorer ones.

For many years, there have been continuous aids in many aspects from the developed countries to the developing countries whose average GPA per capita is only around 500-1000USD. Let's take Vietnam as an example. Every years, Vietnamese students are offered direct aids in education through no less than ten governmental scholarships from Europe, USA, and Japan. In the military, smaller countries like us may be in danger of external invasion just because we can hardly afford the cost of new technologies and equipment. And larger nations may supply these armed facilities directly at no cost or with ODA loan. Besides that, the rich government can give aid of economics to their poorer counterparts in many ways. The Japan's government has a long-term historic relationship with Vietnamese people because of their helping hand in many projects, considerably Can Tho bridges and HCMC Metroline just to name a few.

Apart from bilateral aids, there are many NGO projects aiming to deliver help to those who need special care of the society. These NGO branches appear nearly everywhere in the world, even in war territories to give fresh water, medicine, food at refuge camps. In remoted or highland areas of developing countries, educational projects has been running across distance and over many adversities.

In conclusion, any growth must always be followed with the polarization, creating an income gap between nations and people. However, by sending a helping hand to the poorer nations, the rich government can ensure a sustainable development in global scale.

 

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