My bad day
A lot of thing happend to me . Something was good. And something was good . I had a cooking experience and advanture in computer ,cooking and broken glass .
I wanted open a computer but it didn't open with me .while I stall pressing a button of computer , it blew up and a spark blew in the air. I was gawk in computer . My cusion pulled me away of the fire . We escaped of it. Then we banged a glass . It made a big noisy . I was very terrible fearful . Then after rest a hour . We started cooking .
That day had laughed and cried and destroy a lot of thing . I laugh when I remember that .
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My bad day
A lot of things happend to me lately. some of it was good and others was not. I've had an amazing experience with cooking and using computers.
I wanted to switch on a computer but it didn't while I was holding on the button of the computer, it blew up and a spark blew in the air. I was standing like an idiot staring at all these pieces of it . My cousion pushed me away of the fire. We escaped of it, then we banged a glass which cause a big noisy . I was very terribly fearful Then after rest an hour We started cooking again.
we've laughed and cried and destroyed a lot of things in that day, I laugh when every time I remember that.
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