Please let me help you rephrase the entry to make it simpler. :)

The I study English in Daiweisi

I am very interested to learn English because it will allow me to recreate myself into someone I am not usually like. I love to communicate with foreigners, in fact, I quit my job last April to have more time to master the English language.

I came to Shenzhen to study. My class started last Wednesday and my first teacher is Canadian. I was very glad to see him and we talked about a lot of things even with my poor English.The next day, I met another teacher, her name is Eva. She is a very interesting teacher with black skin and she is from England.

To talk with a native English speaker is a new thing for me. Before I came to Shenzhen I had no one to communicate to in English. I really want to improve my English and I am looking forward to travel countries which speak "the language".

These days I study English in Daiweisi

I am very interested in English. Speaking English can make me find out another side of myself which is very different from what I am usually like in usual. I also like to communicate with foreigners .I quit my job in April. In order to study English better, I came to Shenzhen to have a study。 My class was started on Wednesday this week. The teacher I met in the first day is from Canada.
I was very glad to see him and talked about a lot of things with him in my poor English. The next day I met another teacher who comes from England, named Eva. She is a very interesting teacher, with back skin. To talk with a real foreigner was so fresh to me these days. However, before I came to Shenzhen I had no one to communicate with in English. I really want to improve my English and am looking forward to travel to those country that speak English.

[Good work.  Remember to leave a space after all periods and commas.]

The days I [am] study studying English in Daiweisi.*

I am very interested in English. Speaking English can make me find out another [version of] myself which is very different from what I like in usual I usually like. I also like to communicate with foreigners. I quit my job in April. In order to study English better T I came to Shenzhen to have a study。.

My class was started on Wednesday this week. The teacher I met in on the first day is from Canada.
I was very glad to see him and [I] talked [about] a lot of thing things with him in my poor English. The next day i I met another teacher who come from England, names who is named Eva. She is so a very interesting teacher with back black skin. To talk Talking with real foreign foreigners was is so fresh to me these days. However, before I came to Shenzhen, I had no one to communicate with in English. I really want to improve my English and looking forward to travel those country the countries which speak English.

'Daiweisi' is also a transliteration of 'David', so this may also be interpreted as 'These days, I am studying English with David'.