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Second day
Today is Saturday, but because of National Day, we must be make up a missed lesson rather than have a holiday in the school. Fortunately, we only had one class. By the way, during the National Day, in order to make money, I have decided to stay in school.
Miss you.
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Let me help you rephrase your entry. Plase let me know if this is what you mean:
Second day
It's a Saturday today but we need to go to school to make up for missed lessons last National Day. Fortunately, we only had one class. I wanted to save money so I just stayed in the campus.
Miss you ( I am not quite sure what you meant by this, I am assuming you meant to say "Thank you" or "Take care")
Second day
Today is Saturday, but because of National Day, we must be make up a missed lesson rather than have a holiday in the school. Fortunately, we just was only one class. By the way, during the National Day,in order to make money, I have decede to stay in school ,
Miss you.
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Second day.
It is Saturday today. However, because of National Day, we must make up for a lesson that we missed, rather than having a holiday. Fortunately, it was just one class.
By the way, during National Day, in order to make money, I have decided to stay in school.
Miss you.
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