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First notebook entry: Introducing myself 大家好 我来上海两个星期以前 从日本的东京来的 我想学习汉语为工作 因为我的工作内容是美术关系 我想理解还有对世界介绍中国文化 Hello there, I just relocated to Shanghai 2 months ago from Tokyo, Japan. I came to this land for my job which is art-related and would like to understand and introduce the Chinese culture towards the world.

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

大家好。
我两个月以前从日本东京来到上海。 (星期=week, month=月,which do you mean?)
我来这里是为了我的与美术相关的工作。
我想要理解中国文化,以及向全世界介绍它。

Hello there,
I just relocated to Shanghai 2 months ago from Tokyo, Japan.
I came to this land for my job which is art-related and would like to
understand and introduce the Chinese culture towards the world.

I corrected your Chinese according to your English, but not word by word.
It's just the way Chinese use Chinese.

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

大家好
我来上海两个星期以前 从日本的东京来的
我想学习汉语为工作 因为我的工作内容是美术关系
我想理解还有对世界介绍中国文化

Hello there,
I just relocated to Shanghai 2 months ago from Tokyo, Japan.
I came to this land for my job which is art-related and would like to
understand and introduce the Chinese culture towards the world.

大家好
我是两个星期前从日本东京来到上海的。
我因为做和美术有关的工作来到这里(我为了工作而学汉语,因为我的工作和美术有关)
还有,我想了解并向世界介绍中国文化。

*説明
(i do not know if this composition   is your translation from english  or not,so it looks a little strange......
for example   " for " ,translation in chinese is”为了。。。。”  or   "  因为。。。的关系”
and we put the time before the verb, just like the japanese”二週間前に上海にきった。”
もう一つ、“我从东京来到上海是两个星期以前的事了”これでいいと思います。これ対して日本語は“僕は日本の東京から上海までのはもう2週間前のことでした。”
そして、art-related って日本語でアート関係があるですか?もしそれは正しいなら、中国語で“与。。。有关”ということです。
最後に、了解と理解ですね。。。ええと。。ここで、了解は理解の上にもっと詳しく知りたいんということです。
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

大家好
我是两个星期以前来上海的 从日本的东京来的
我想为工作学习汉语 因为我的工作内容是美术关系
我想理解还有向世界介绍中国文化

Hello there,
I just relocated to Shanghai 2 months ago from Tokyo, Japan.
I came to this land for my job which is art-related and would like to
understand and introduce the Chinese culture towards the world.
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Thank you everyone for correcting my poor Chinese. I find this very useful as I could learn different ways of expressing things. If you have any questions on Japanese or English, just let me know. 谢谢!
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

It could be better "我從日本東京來到上海已有2個多月,由於我的工作是美術相關方面,因此想學習並理解漢語,以期向全世界介紹中華文化。"(I like your dream^^)

My name is Joyce, and I come from Taiwan where we use traditional Chinese characters, very beautiful words. 
Could I have the pleasure to be your language exchange partner through msn? We can speak mandarin 10 mins and 10 mins for English.
 

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