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Self-introduction Self-introduction Good afternoon everyone ! It is my honor to have this opportuneity for the interview . I hope I can make a good performance today .and I will try my best . Now I will introduce my self briefly . My name is KRISTAL . I am in class 3 and my major is Landscape Architecture , which worth I spend a lot of energy and time to learn more about it . During last 3 years in my university , I had great progress . Not only in my intelligence , but also on my professional skills , such as the software and design . As for my study , I have got the scholarship every year and at the top in my grade . I have passed CET-6 when I was in grade one . I have take part in many competitions and get awards . I am a person of great honesty to others and glad helping someone whoever is in trouble . I have done many social jobs for my class and my college before . Although I am just a senior student in university and have not contact with society or done a complete project , I do prefer my major . In fact , when I just entranced to the college , I did not know what will happen and how will my life become in the future . I love drawing since very younge but what need me to draw is totally different . I had to learn from zero . I do remember the nights I spent in the studio or with my teammates just for some team-work in a café . I am lack of sleep almost everyday . Yes , LA is a difficult major and it will cost our time from day to night just for a project . I do not have any weekends for months , the evens I have to deal with day by day are just finishing all kinds of my homeworks which is related to LA . However , I do love my major . I know that I still have a long way to go and there are plenty of major kownledge to learn , but I will just pick myself up on this way and carry on . In order to achieve my target , I choose to continue my study after finishing the bachelor’s degree . It means that I will take the master’s degree to learn more about LA deeply and professionally . That is the reason why I stand here . Ancestors said that “ God helps those who help themselves “ . I believe that with my efforts , I will hit my target in the end . That is all , thank you !

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Self-introduction

Self-introduction

Good afternoon everyone !

It is my honor to have this opportuneity for the interview. I hope I can make a good performance today.  I will try my best. Now I will introduce my self briefly .

My name is KRISTAL. I am in class 3 and my major is landscape architecture , a subject in which I have spent much time and energy becoming proficient.

During the last 3 years in my university, I have made great progress, not only in my general knowledge,but also on my professional skills, such as the software and design .

As for my study, I have received a scholarship every year and at the top in my grade. I have passed CET-6 when I was in grade one. I have taken part in many competitions and have received a number of awards. I am a person of great honesty to others and and am glad to help whoever is experiencing diffuculty or needs help resolving a problem. I have done many social jobs for my class and my college.

Although I am just a senior student in university and have not had extensive contact with society or done a complete project, I am capable in my major .

In fact, when I had just entered college, I did not know what would happen and how will my life would develop in the future. I have loved drawing from a young age, but what I needed was to draw somethng totally different. I had to learn starting from zero . I do remember the nights I spent in the studio or with my teammates just for some team-work in a café. I made do with only a  little sleep almost every day. Yes, LA is a difficult major and it demands our time every day just to finish project. I did not have any free weekends for months. It took all my time day-to-day just to finish my homework and assigned projects related to LA. However, I do love my major.

I know that I still have a long way to go and there is still much to learn in my chosen field, but I will just pick myself up on this way and carry on .

In order to achieve my target, I have chosen to continue my study after finishing the bachelor’s degree. It means that I will use the master’s degree to learn more about LA deeply and professionally. That is the reason why I stand here .

Ancestors said that “ God helps those who help themselves “. I believe that with my efforts , I will hit my target in the end .

That is all , thank you !

 

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