My rommie Tayde!

I was born in a city called Oaxaca, but I'm living in Carmen, an island to 13 hours from the city where I was born. I'm living here for my studies (Chemical Engineering), I enjoy the time here, especially when I get to spend my time on the beach. Unfortunately, my family is too far and I can't see them very often. Thanks to my friend and my roomie, I don't have time for missing my family. My roommate is Tayde, she is a 24 years old girl, she is studying the same subject as me. I have lived with her for 4 years and I think there is no one who can support me more than her. I have a very volatile character and she's so different, she's so quiet and she can give good advice! We have many things in common like dancing and watching movies. I think the only problem is the TV. We haven't usually got time for watching it but when we do, I prefer watch soccer matches and she loves the soap operas (ewww) . There is one tv so, it's really a problem.

Well done! Good variation in vocabulary.

My rommie Tayde!

I was born in a city called Oaxaca, but I'm living in Carmen, an Island to that is 13 hours driving from the city where I was born. I'm living here for because of my studies (Chemical Engineering), I enjoy the time here, especially when I spent my time on the beach. Unfortunately My family is too far and I can't see them continued continuesly (very often) . Thanks to my friend and my roomate I can't do not have time for missing my family. My roomate is Tayde, she is a 24 years old girl, she is studying the same subject than me, I have living lived with her for 4 years and I think there is no one who can support me more than her, I've a very volatile character and she's so different, she's so quite and she can give good advices! We have many things in common like dancing and watching movies, I think the only problem is the TV, We haven't usually do not have time for watching it but when we have , I prefer to watch soccer matches and she loves to watch soap operas (ewww) . There is only one tv so, it's really a problem.

Hola Dulce! :)

Me tomé un poco de tiempo para revisar tu ultima entrada en tu diario y a pesar de haber encontrado muchos errores gramaticales, me complace decirte que la mayoria de los enunciados fueron escritos de la manera y sentido correctos. Mi recomendacion sería, utilizaste muchas contracciones, trata hablar el idioma sin utilizar contracciones, de esta manera te familiarizaras con la estructura de las palabras y las adaptaras a tu vocabulario, con el tiempo puedes volver a las contracciones pero en esta ocasion encontraras el momento adecuado para utilizarlas. Si tienes alguna pregunta, te puedes sentir en confianza de enviarme un mensaje, 

saludos y pasa un excelente dia!

Uri Quintal.