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The County Fair Food I usually work out daily for 60 minutes for my pig-out plan. The one of plans is "The fair food" in California. But sadly, I could not go back to the county fair this summer. So, I was a bit lazy woman without the great motivation.It is hard to snap out of it right now although I have recieved some mails from my gym. I grew up in the American food. Because my mother is not Japanese and she could not adapt to Japanese traditional meals and she never had made it when I was a child. I love American fair food as much as people I love.it reminds me of childhood often as flashbacks. Here's my all-time top three fair food that I look forward to every summer. 1;Australian battered potatoes 2;Funnel cakes 3;Chicken Shish kabobs I am getting hungry just writing about it..how lazy I am. Maybe it is perfect time to get to my ass to the gym. -The End-

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Hello! I love your creative topic and witty writing style. Here are a few corrections (changes in blue). ~ Mariah J.

 

County Fair Food

 

I usually work out daily for 60 minutes to accomodate my pig-out plan. One part of the plan is "fair food" in California, but sadly, I could not go back to the county fair this summer. So, I was a bit lazy; a woman without much motivation. It is hard to snap out of it right now although I have recieved some emails from my gym.

I grew up eating American food. Because my mother is not Japanese, she could not adapt to Japanese traditional meals and she never made it when I was a child. I love American fair food as much as I love people. It often reminds me of my childhood in flashbacks.

Here are my all-time top three fair foods that I look forward to every summer:
1. Australian battered potatoes
2. Funnel cakes
3. Chicken shish kabobs


I am getting hungry just writing about it...how lazy I am! Maybe this is the perfect time to get to my ass to the gym.

-The End-

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I am wondering. If I received mails via post office, should I say that I received direct mails?
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Hey SteveMP san, where can I get these deep fried Twinkie thing? the only snack at the fair? they look sooooooo yummy, I just googled it now!! As for your suggestion about fair ride, I am ok to keep eating because I have acrophobia... But it is very tough job for me to control calories..I was watching the the biggest loser,though..I even bought the skinny bitch books which were totally useless..
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Hi Fred,Sorry you couldn't get to the fair...well..how can I wait to go back to fair which is one of my favorite places on earth..until next summer?!
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Mmmmmmmmm...funnel cakes, so good. did you try the deep fried Twinkle? So good, or deep fried cinnamon roll? Also very good. One I didn't try yet was the "deep fried butter". I'm not even sure how they make it without it melting onto goo. Fair food is yummy, but I also like in Europe those crepe carts that sell crepes with Nutella and bananas and the liquer. Just make sure to go on any fair rides BEFORE eating too much fair food! Also, no need to work out, you can balance calories out over the week ;)

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