Search from various English teachers...
China flagDaisy
wake me up when september ends Probably six or seven p.m..The sky looks dark . I was sitting on the balcony and looking outside . Several people were walking down the street with Lantern on their hands beacuse it's Mid-Autumn Day . My friend was passing by my house and she saw me . She waved her hand and said :hey ,let ‘s go see the lanterns I said :ok .wait a minute . I grabbed my coat and went out . I opened the door When i came to the first flood . It was sunny day outside .just likes afternoon with sunshine . The people supposed to be here but they were disappeared . My friend was waitting for me in the corner She said :You should bring you umbrella ,It will be a strong rain soon I said :It 's still sunny day . She said : the typhoon is coming . Then she opened the umbrella We went through the shade and it started raining .In the shade . Typhoon is coming in reality

Corrections · 4

1

Wake Me Up When September Ends (Green Day?)

It is probably six or seven P.M. The sky looks dark.
I was sitting on the balcony and looking outside.
Several people were walking down the street with a lantern in their hands beacuse it's Mid-Autumn Day.
My friend was passing by my house and she saw me.
She waved her hand at me and said: "Hey, let ‘s go see the lanterns!" 
I said: "Okay. Wait a minute." 
I grabbed my coat and went out .
I opened the door when I came to the first flood realized there was a flood.
It was sunny day outside, just like a normal afternoon with sunshine.
The People were supposed to be here but they were had disappeared.
My friend was waitting for me in the corner. 
She said: "You should bring your umbrella. It will be a strong There will be heavy rain soon. 
I said: "It 's still sunny day." 
She said: "The typhoon is coming." 
Then she opened the her umbrella. 
As we went through the shade, and it started raining.In the shade .

Typhoon is coming in reality The typhoon is really coming.

0
I love the song Wake me up when the September ends very much! It can remind me so memories.

Want to progress faster?

Join this learning community and try out free exercises!

Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!

Start Learning Today