My Great Britain The United Kingdom

My Great Britain The United Kingdom is not just a country, it is a symbol of honor, nobility, elegance, art and tradition.
My first encounter with London was through my favorite music. The first song, the picture on of the Abbey Road and the four young men from Liverpool will always remain in my heart. Their wonderful songs and love, love , love, awakened in me a desire the desire in me to get to know Britain the UK better. 
My fascination began with a study of on the traditions of this ancient country. Oatmeal for breakfast, afternoon tea, small gifts, attention and gratitude (what are you trying to say?) - all this these had me in the shower and I started to fall in love with a Foggy Albion. Then I began to study the history and realized how deep (what are you trying to say?) incredible this country is. The Queen, the country's castles, its flag called - the Union Jack, the cute dogs bulldogs, the River Thames, abbeys, bridges, and museums, the great Shakespeare, the immortal Sherlock Homls (Sherlock Holmes is a fictional character) attracted and still beckon beckoned my soul.
My Great Britain is not just astone, character and talent, but also a great natural beauty. The UK is not just any country, it's a paradise. The scenery of Windsor Park, Sherwood Forest and many more shocks me their viewstake breath away. But what about the rain which scares why is the constant rainfall disliked by many tourists? But it always pleased me, because I love the rain. (you're making the sentence unnessarily long) My Great Britain - this is not just a country, it is a dream, this is my soul mate . My Kingdom is a The UK has wonderful beautiful music (avoid using the same over and over again), wonderful people, fabulous views and amazing history. of this country and this nation

*Note:

1. Great Britian is not a country it's an island itself together with a number of surrounding islands which constitude the terrtory of England, Scotland and Wales. The United Kingdom of Great Britian and Northern Island (commonly known as the United Kingdom) is the country that you meant.

2. There's no spacing before each puntuation - comma, fullstop etc.

A lighter touch:

My Great Britain

My Great Britain is not just a country, it is a symbol of honor , nobility, elegance, art and tradition ..
My first encounter with London was through my favorite music. The first song, the picture on the Abbey Road album cover with the four young men from Liverpool will always remain in my heart. Their wonderful songs and love, love, love, awakened in me a desire to get to know Britain.
My fascination began with a study of the traditions of this ancient country. Porridge for breakfast, afternoon tea, small gifts, attention and gratitude - all this overwhelmed me in the shower and I started to fall in love with a Foggy Albion. Then I began to study the history and realized the depth of this country. The Queen, the country's castles, the national flag (called the Union Jack), the cute dogs bulldogs, the Thames, the abbeys, the bridges and museums, the great Shakespeare, the immortal Sherlock Holmes, attracted and still beckon my soul.
My Great Britain is not just astone???, character and talent, but also a great natural beauty. Windsor Park, Sherwood Forest and many more shocks me with their vistas. But what about the rain, which scares many tourists? Well, it always pleases me, because I love the rain ..
My Great Britain - this is not just a country, it is a dream; this is my soul mate. My Kingdom is one of  wonderful music, wonderful people, fabulous views and the amazing history of this nation.

Stephanie is right - there are no spaces before punctuation marks, only after. (Exception: opening speech marks " and opening brackets ( [ {    )