Help me...

I wish to improve my English. Unfortunately, my English is not as good as I want. By nature, I m a friendly and kindhearted person. So, I will be very glad to communicate to everyone who likes to make new friends. :))

Aizhan,

Your text is very nice :) It's nice to meet you here. 

Miranda :)

Help me...

I wish to improve my English. Unfortunately my English is not as good as I would like. By nature, I'm a friendly and kindhearted person. So, I would be happy to communicate with anyone who likes to make new friends. :))

English is a very flexible and rich language; all the above corrections are also correct.

Don't be discouraged if you see many forms of correction, Iam sure that you will soon understand why.

just keep trying!

:0)

Help me...

I wish to improve my English. Unfortunately my English is not so as good as I want (it to be [you can add it as a variation.]). By nature, I'm friendly and kindhearted person. So, I will be very glad to(or instead you can say "gladly to") communicate with anyone interested in making new friendships to all who likes to get new friends. :))

Вы молодцы! У Вас не так уж и много ошибок. Последнее предложение я исправил больше как вариант. Если нужна помощь с английским, могу помочь.

А так, Вы не переживайте, самое главное не теряйте интереса и тогда у Вас все получится!
Я, надеюсь, не обидел Вас своими исправлениями. Лишь хотел помочь.=)
 

Help me...

I wish to improve my English. Unfortunately, my English is not as good as I want it to be. By nature, I'm a friendly and kindhearted person. So, I will be very glad to communicate to all who like making new friends. :))

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Great! Nice to meet you :)